Es in medicine and passive fire protection materialsAblation is not the same as ablution which I think is the word you were searching for Wikipedia says the following in regards to ablutions Not to be confused with oblation or ablation LOL how prophetic
is that Ablution is the act of washing oneselfShakes head in resignation at authors ver learning the that Ablution is the act of washing oneselfShakes head in resignation at authors ver learning the of correct spelling punctuation and grammar To be continuedSame page just minutes later Umm why is honeymoon capitalised If it s not the start of a sentence it doesn t need to be capitalised It s not a proper noun in any way shape or form To be continuedNext page Tall runners build broad shoulders You re talking about Morgen having the build of a runner therefore runners is possessive and needs an apostrophe To be continuedSame page Two uestions Why does Leigh call Brian s new wife ueen Bitch when the only things we know about her are that her name is Veronica and she owns a Bulldog And secondly who skinny dips in unknown neighbour s pools That s just weird and wrong No wonder Morgen doesn t like him although I m pretty sure Leigh is taking the heated glances the wrong way To be continuedTwo pages later I ve decided to ignore all but the most glaringly obvious or just plain weird xamples of bad writinggrammarspellingpunctuation you know all the fun stuff otherwise I ll be here all night reading just 15 pages and my review will Big Little Man end up longer than the book Anyway the following sentence is anxample of just plain weird bad writing and spelling I ve just noticed He Morgen found himself in the living room all sorts of towels behind his back a large whicker basket with a blanket in it and a few bowls slightly steamingOh dear Where do I start with that stinker If the towels are few bowls slightly steamingOh dear Where do I start with that stinker If the towels are Morgen s back how does he know they re there Wicker with an H And why are the bowls steaming I hope they re not sitting on the carpet they might melt it if they re hot nough to steam all by themselves To be continuedAnother page later Why would Morgen need to spend the night He lives next #door It s not like it s a long drive or ven walk home To be continuedFinished Dreadful punctuation #It s not like it s a long drive or Creating Lasting Value even walk home To be continuedFinished Dreadful punctuation bad writing plagued by illogicality and below average spelling An all around bad book that I m really glad I didn t pay for with anythingxpensive than my time This is the second Love is Always Write book that I ve read fortunately this was the only one that has been a complete waste of my time The Rest of Forever by Kate Aaron was actually uite good. Always Write vent Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short storyRead the story here or find it in Love Is Always Write Volume. .
The concept here is sweet if little far fetched but the compiling of it all doesn t work very well There are a lot of grammarediting rrors changes in tenses that sort of thing that pulled me right out of the story on a number of occasionsLeigh wakes up one morning to find out his best friend
and roommate has loped with his girlfriend and left her dog for Leigh to take care of while theyroommate has loped with his girlfriend and left her dog for Leigh to take care of while they gone on their honeymoon for three months Surprise surprise though Priscilla is pregnant and goes into labor that very night Luckily there s a vet living across the street and Morgan is willing to help out in spite of the past skinny dipping caused tension between him and Lei This is a nice short story that revolves around dogs with a little romance mixed in view spoilerI thought the reason Morgen disliked Leigh was little silly but it was nice they could overcome their differences hide spoiler Cute short about a dog sitting friend needing his sexy vet neighbors helpI liked it but it was just way too short I sort of missed the relationship developing between the MC s and it s a HFN at best Offered for FREE from the MM Romance Group Love Is Always Write Volume FourHmm this is kind of hard to review I feel like I read the beginning and the Immerwelt - Der Pakt end of a story and missed the middle If we had gotten to see those few weeks in between with Morgan stopping by to check on Leigh and the pups then maybe we would have seen some sexual tension some flirting anything But as it was we just had that one interaction to go by at the birth and then Morgan just starts sucking Leigh s face out of nowhere a few weeks later Unfortunate because this could have been a lot better with a little flushing out of the storyNow the few annoying uirks Who gets a 4 month paid vacation Who leaves their dog with someone for 3 months withoutven asking the person or giving them any warning let alone leave any supplies I would not be friends with this person any and maybe Modern South Asia even calling the ASPCA on their ass since they re clearly not responsiblenough to own an Picture Theory effen pet Who goes on a 3 month honeymoon And lastly why did Morgan need to stay the night after the pups were born He lives next door Firstly to address the complaints that this is a MM story in the description on UK it says Love is Always Writevent at the MM Romance Group on GoodReads so unless this is not present Ancestral Voices elsewhere I consider those complaints void Not to mention fromarly on in the story there were comments about dating girls in general followed by. Dear AuthorThis is Priscilla My friend loped with his bitch girlfriend and left Priscilla to me Unfortunately I think she is about to deliver puppies I know nothing about girls and nothing about dogs but don't think she can deliver on her own I need help fa.
Elyse Night ✓ 2 DownloadSomething along the line of well I ll never have that troubleI have no issue with the genre in fact I found it very ndearing so my rating is not based on that Overall just looking at the plot I thought it was a sweet short story and held potential which sadly was not met The plot uickly became rushed leaving goldmines of Aristotle Detective (Aristotle emotion and feeling untapped This story could have been greatly improved by the writer taking time and making it longer because I wanted to like it and I wanted it to keep goingIn several places the tense also changed or the point of view became suspect I feel this could have beenasily fixed with a good proof read and would have arned it another star Very short story about Leigh who s left to babysit a pregnant bulldog at his house by his roommate s fiance Priscilla the bulldog gives birth and Leigh needs help from Dr Morgen Silver the vet who he s attracted to but thinks the vet dislikes himSince the story is very short we don t get much of a glimpse into the personalities of the characters as much as I would have liked But the story fit the prompt and image given
cute free Way too short You don t really get to know ither of the guys and there is zero relationship building So while it s cute you learn about the dog and roommate then the MCs And where does he work that hea on a four month vacation And no plans Also there was some great stuff that was in the prompt but No Just no Bad spelling bad grammar horrible writing Too short too nothing to rateFelt I missed a few chapters and several steps along the wayThe characters didn t ven talk there was nothing then woah lip attackNo idea why the friend s girlfriend was an oft repeated bitch or at what point he became a room mateNever heard of four months paid leave to look after a dogOnly just read it and I ve forgotten the characters namesHow the hell do you write a story with six freshly born puppies that s devoid of warm snuggly cuteness How WhyA prompt with so much potential for adorableness Sad 87 Sixth line SIXTH I tell you we have this little gem he dragged his aching body to his bathroom making his morning ablationsI m sorry to tell you Ms Night but ablationsa cute free
Doesn T Mean Whatt mean what think it means Here is a uick description from Wikipedia Ablation is removal of material from the surface of an object by vaporization chipping or other rosive processes Examples of ablative materials include spacecraft material for ascent and atmospheric re ntry ice and snow in glaciology biological tissu. St My neighbor Dr Silver is the only vet in town and I think he hates me He may have caught me skinny dipping in his pool than oncePhoto Description Bulldog being xamined by a dark haired vetThis story was written as a part of the MM Romance Group's Love is.